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Tuesday 12 August 2014

Dimante War Poetry

This is my poem explaining war using adjectives, participles, nouns. Hope you enjoy :)


2 comments:

  1. You have followed the diamante poem rules for each line. Try and keep the layout of the words in a diamond shape if you can.

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  2. This caught my eye Elisabeth and I was so pleased to see that you are being creative with your learning and sharing on your blog. Miss Garden made a very helpful suggestion about the layout. I thought you used some very insightful words in your poem.

    Mrs Burt

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